That's a pretty sweet advert. I like how you incorporated the ideas from the Pricken book.

Good luck with the essay, now that you actually have material to write about.

Those glue boys are a little too squeaky clean... it makes me suspicious.

Ian.

Anthony...

so elmer's glue is pretty much a flawless, upstanding corporation, that is incrdibly difficult to subvertise...so i had to change.

here's one idea. its a subvertisement of that mcdonalds sundial ad in pricken book where the shadow reflect on what mcdonalds product to eat.

anthony opinions...

the truck is one is hilarious and good. my issues with the other one stem mainly from the grave itself. using the cross like that has too many religious connotations and misses the point i a little bit.

maybe if you did the traditional oval-topped kinda stone that says RIP _____ it would come off more clear.

I think it should be TREEMENDOUS with the "TREE" in orange - to like up with the other ads.

In addition the orange peel on the grave is a sweet idea, but the spiraling doesn't make sense right now. Might have to rework it.

On the whole both ads feel good... On the whole.

ian.

nicki's subs

gimme some suggestions, yo

few changes.

Here's my subvertisement..