... it's like WHITE glue and WHITE space... TOGETHER...

... you're like SO deep...


In all seriousness I like it.

Ian.

Anthony Ad Attempts...

here's one using repetition and accumulation, as well as creative use of white space.

Anthony Input...

Ian, both those ads are vastly improved. not too sure about the text wrapping around the shoe tho. if you could make it a bit more precise id say keep it, but if not, id just keep the text straight.

ps. erratic attic

pps. popcorn mustache was a success, 85, and 80...not bad. not bad at all.

Thanks for the input Allison. I agree that the "blazer sb" text seems out of place and it was one of my personal criticisms. I had initially wrapped it around the heel like you mentioned, but for some reason didn't stick with it. Perhaps I'll give it another look to see if it compliments the design better.

Thanks again,

Ian.

Ian, I really like your ads. Both of your ads are original and provide a new angle to Nike's advertising campaign. The maze and corresponding slogan complement each other nicely, and the check mark in the maze ties the design together.

You mentioned you were looking for a different slogan for the other ad, but I think the current one you have is effective. And the addition of the text, "use repsonsibly", provides a nice touch of humour to the ad. The only thing I would change is the "blazer sb" text because I think the curving of it creates too much noise and the positioning of it at the top of the shoe detracts from the text at the bottom. Maybe shift the text at the bottom to the left slightly and wrap the "blazer sb" text around the heel of the shoe?
allison.

Here's my two new Nike ads. Same goes for the earlier post. If you have any suggestions, let me know.

Thanks,

Ian.

hey guys. here's the first of my reworked nike ads. let me know what you think.

I'm still not 100% on the slogan "for the every day get away". If you can think of anything better I'm open to suggestions.

Thanks,

Ian.